anthobull's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Strange Fruit"]

wow........

Very moving and thought provoking.
I liked how both song and animation never frontally made references to actual death, but still gave enough information to deduct that someone was hung.
Rather abstract style of drawing, but somehow that just adds to the mystery of the piece. All in all a very well done work, but somehow this reminds me of game "Afro Samurai".......
Don't know how I got that idea

[Harry The Harlequin Fetus]

0.0

What......
The.......
F**k.......
Congratulations on your new masterpiece, although this has to be one of the most CRAZY things ever to set foot on newgrounds. (not including Blek Kophi, or some of the other WIERD flashes going around here nowdays)

And if no-one's told you this before, this flash is perfect puking material.
But for the love of god PUT IN SOME WARNINGS MAN, like "this flash is guaranteed to scar you for at leased half an hour of your life" or something like that.

All in all, great flash, but I'm not too sure about eatin breakfast now........
Knowing my luck something will jump out of the cereal box and kill me.

[happy noise]

*Speechless*

All that I can say is that this is great for a first flash.
It was a bit short but the whole thing was rather sweet.

[The Reaper vs. Satan]

Rock, Paper, Scissors lol. Unecpected.

...........But are you doing this on purpose???
I mean, "PREPAIR" for the epic battle?????
Come on, you have to be kidding me, It's a good flash and all but you seem to make spelling errors in most of the flash you submit, It's-........ It's just uncanny.

Can you PLEASE try to get the spelling correct in your flash? It makes you look like some special needs kid in English.

[The Reaper vs. Carl]

Here Come The Critics.

For starters, I'll say that It's a rather good animation.

BUT...

To point out the obvious, this flash has no point and no background, neither do most flashes, but with this you are thrown into the middle (or near end) of a plot without any background information about what has happened up till this point, in short, you are thrown into the deep end of a pool without first learning how to swim, and have to work out the basics from what is going on around you.

There are also spelling errors throughout the flash, like when the reaper says "You are a lot weaker than I Tought, Carl" (and yes, there is no way that it CAN be "tought") and other mistakes I will leave you to find yourself.

For an improvement (if you can be stuffed to take my advice) I would add either a main menu or at leased some background information into the storyline at the beginning, or even in the "author comments" section, just so viewers can actually come to appreciate what is happening in the flash, or even better, (again, if you can actually be stuffed to do this) make a prequel to this submission, it doesn't have to be anything hard or flashy, just something to portray the turn of events a bit better.
(It might help to find some inspiration from the Castle Series' prequel).

Now that's over, I have to say that this IS one of the better flash submitted nowadays, and you might even be able to evolve this into a series if you run out of ideas for Ripped Up.

Once again, good flash, and don't get to worried over the niggly bits, this is what I do in my spare time. (I have no life T-T)

[Very Badly Animated Man]

"Question Mark"?????????

That is one STRANGE flash.
I thought the days of cliché story-lines and corny catchphrases were over.
Really awkward flash to be watching with your sister looking over your shoulder, but overall the flash is rather good.

You might want to make your next flash a LOT less corny.

[Compilation of stupidity]

Well............

Let me put it this way.....
The flash itself was pretty gei, but you also have some FAIRLY good animating skills.

My suggestion is to actually take the time to make a storyline and not give up on it, no matter how long it takes.

You might come up with something good. ;P

MUDrSauron responds:

Most of those were just experiments in one way or the another. And you understood the the situation exactly. Ithought of a story and started animating and after 3 scenes or so I realised how insanely stupid the plot is and lost the interest to finish it... but then again they certainly have helped me to understand flasha bit more. I have some larger projects in the state of making so I guess I'll use the experience there. Thnx for taking your time and reviewing!