Absolutely Brilliant Portrayal of Life
And to those of you out there who think you can get away with screwing up the score of this flash just because it's related to God in some way, then YOU need to grow up and realize that most good people who believe in a deity or God already KNOW that he/she/it doesn't really exist, rather it's the ideals and cultures of a certain religion that makes it worth believing in to find some kind of comfort or fulfillment in life.
It's just like drugs; you KNOW that unicorn doesn't REALLY exist, but the idea of it makes you want to see it again.
Anyway, it was a brilliant flash, and if i could give it any score other than 10/10, I'd have to give it an 11.
Very moving and thought provoking.
I liked how both song and animation never frontally made references to actual death, but still gave enough information to deduct that someone was hung.
Rather abstract style of drawing, but somehow that just adds to the mystery of the piece. All in all a very well done work, but somehow this reminds me of game "Afro Samurai".......
Don't know how I got that idea
Congratulations on your new masterpiece, although this has to be one of the most CRAZY things ever to set foot on newgrounds. (not including Blek Kophi, or some of the other WIERD flashes going around here nowdays)
And if no-one's told you this before, this flash is perfect puking material.
But for the love of god PUT IN SOME WARNINGS MAN, like "this flash is guaranteed to scar you for at leased half an hour of your life" or something like that.
All in all, great flash, but I'm not too sure about eatin breakfast now........
Knowing my luck something will jump out of the cereal box and kill me.
All that I can say is that this is great for a first flash.
It was a bit short but the whole thing was rather sweet.
lol, poor luigi.....
This has to be one of the most catchy mario tunes on NG.
Couple that with japanese style animating and you have something that everyone loves.
This is ALOT better than the original although the original was kinda good too.
Great job and keep it up.
If you really took time and, instead of speed animating, make the quality better (like putting in color) you could make quite a good anime/flash.
The movie, I think, was terrific for three days, and somehow even touched my stone-cold heart.
I'd have to say that for one, you are great at making interesting storylines. (although I could have sworn you got inspiration for the last bit out of a movie)
Real Great Flash, and keep it up.
Rock, Paper, Scissors lol. Unecpected.
...........But are you doing this on purpose???
I mean, "PREPAIR" for the epic battle?????
Come on, you have to be kidding me, It's a good flash and all but you seem to make spelling errors in most of the flash you submit, It's-........ It's just uncanny.
Can you PLEASE try to get the spelling correct in your flash? It makes you look like some special needs kid in English.
Here Come The Critics.
For starters, I'll say that It's a rather good animation.
To point out the obvious, this flash has no point and no background, neither do most flashes, but with this you are thrown into the middle (or near end) of a plot without any background information about what has happened up till this point, in short, you are thrown into the deep end of a pool without first learning how to swim, and have to work out the basics from what is going on around you.
There are also spelling errors throughout the flash, like when the reaper says "You are a lot weaker than I Tought, Carl" (and yes, there is no way that it CAN be "tought") and other mistakes I will leave you to find yourself.
For an improvement (if you can be stuffed to take my advice) I would add either a main menu or at leased some background information into the storyline at the beginning, or even in the "author comments" section, just so viewers can actually come to appreciate what is happening in the flash, or even better, (again, if you can actually be stuffed to do this) make a prequel to this submission, it doesn't have to be anything hard or flashy, just something to portray the turn of events a bit better.
(It might help to find some inspiration from the Castle Series' prequel).
Now that's over, I have to say that this IS one of the better flash submitted nowadays, and you might even be able to evolve this into a series if you run out of ideas for Ripped Up.
Once again, good flash, and don't get to worried over the niggly bits, this is what I do in my spare time. (I have no life T-T)
That is one STRANGE flash.
I thought the days of cliché story-lines and corny catchphrases were over.
Really awkward flash to be watching with your sister looking over your shoulder, but overall the flash is rather good.
You might want to make your next flash a LOT less corny.
Let me put it this way.....
The flash itself was pretty gei, but you also have some FAIRLY good animating skills.
My suggestion is to actually take the time to make a storyline and not give up on it, no matter how long it takes.
You might come up with something good. ;P
Most of those were just experiments in one way or the another. And you understood the the situation exactly. Ithought of a story and started animating and after 3 scenes or so I realised how insanely stupid the plot is and lost the interest to finish it... but then again they certainly have helped me to understand flasha bit more. I have some larger projects in the state of making so I guess I'll use the experience there. Thnx for taking your time and reviewing!
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